Writing a paragraph about our organs

WALT: We learnt how to write a paragraph using the TEXT format.

We paired up with a friend and had to research about a specific organ. My friend and I chose the heart. We first made a mind map. Then we followed the TEXT to write our paragraph.

This is our paragraph:
The heart is one of the most important organs in your body. Your heart pumps blood all around your body. Your rib cage protects your heart.  The heart is made of four different chambers. The heart is important because it pumps blood around your body, delivering oxygen and nutrients to your cells and removing waste products. ... There are valves between the atria and ventricles that make sure blood flows in one direction through your heart. Your heart is sort of like a pump, or two pumps in one. The right side of your heart receives blood from the body and pumps it to the lungs.

Reflection: I found it easy to research about the organs. I had difficulty with working with a partner. Next time I would like to add more details more details in my writing.

What do you think the most important organ in your body is?
by Cody and Fern